I Will Hide His Love

Short sweet n sad i like it..
but feelings dont hide away...like secrets they come out one day...

5/5

I believe u could have made it better...its a very good start but it needs some work...some of ur gramer that needs to be changed but after all its a good poem...try to make it more longer...give it an ending..

It is good keep hiding it, but knowing you I think you fall for an idiot, so he will not be wise, joking.
it is an ok pom