Wow, that was truly a sad, sad story. You read the story. Saw it unfold in front of you, and knew the direction it was taking, but you couldn't stop yourself from finishing. Kept me captivated. Absolutely wonderful imagery in this story. The flow was great, and the heartfelt emotion in your words astounding. Beautiful piece of art.
That was actually incrediably amazing and proves of your talent, i absolutley loved it, everyline was flawless and the flow was amazing and the ending took my breath away. truly amazing. I could really relate to this line
For strength was what she yearned to have,
But love, she wanted more.
Hey baby, what a beautiful and exquisite write, although painfully sad. I wish I could write with such feeling and passion, but I kbnow the hurt and pain behind it - Im glad you channel it in this way.