Comments : How She Stopped The Train

  • 12 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow. A very well written and deep poem. This is one of the best I have read in a long while. The title brought me in and the poem made me stay. If you have the time, please check out my poem. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wicked Poem. Very Original. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by hayley

    Very original.....i love it. keep writting, never give up

  • 12 years ago

    by Adeline

    I loved it sooo much...it sounded much more like a movie to me and i was picturing everything when i read it...it was soo good u can be an author...^_^
    loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    Wow! this gave me an eerie feeling,you are really very talented. great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Wow, that was truly a sad, sad story. You read the story. Saw it unfold in front of you, and knew the direction it was taking, but you couldn't stop yourself from finishing. Kept me captivated. Absolutely wonderful imagery in this story. The flow was great, and the heartfelt emotion in your words astounding. Beautiful piece of art.

  • That was actually incrediably amazing and proves of your talent, i absolutley loved it, everyline was flawless and the flow was amazing and the ending took my breath away. truly amazing. I could really relate to this line

    For strength was what she yearned to have,
    But love, she wanted more.

    a fantastic write

    well done
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beautifully sad...excellent flow and great story.....really enjoyed this! All the best, Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beautifully sad...excellent flow and great story.....really enjoyed this! All the best, Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by Katie

    Hey baby, what a beautiful and exquisite write, although painfully sad. I wish I could write with such feeling and passion, but I kbnow the hurt and pain behind it - Im glad you channel it in this way.
    K xx

  • 10 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    That was so sad. But screamed out, to me, and, just seemed to say how hard it is to live without someone.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Quietly, she walks alone,
    And gently tilts her head.
    She knows that what she has to do
    Will free his heart instead.

    I was captured with that one paragraph!
    What a beautiful poem.