Comments : Like Unto A Leopard (Villanelle)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    Wow, this really is a dark poem. I'm not used to dark poems, I don't understand them many times, but I can tell that this one is good. It does feel original.

    I loved some things about this poem of yours. I really liked the repetition of this line:

    I think I'm being bred to be the anti-christ

    It made it strong and meaningful.

    My favorite part of this poem was the first stanza, especially the second line.

    Great job! 5/5

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very well crafted! I enjoyed this piece immensely. Well done.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly