Very nice. You used pretty good imagry also. I really liked the first line, I thought that was a great way to open the poem. Excellent write. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Amazing nature poem...i dont see that many nature poems that are a good read...sometimes i happen to stumble upon one like yours:)...i think the rhyming was perfect and it was short and sweet!!!...Great READ!!:)

Well im guessing your on right now since u commented me back in like 2.5 seconds:P. anyway, wow. u kno every poem by you is great! its amazing. this had wonderous detailing. it painted a great picture. 5/5 again.:D

Profoundly mysterious poem

Amazingly written....very unique but def. an awesome write!

I have nothing to say this is not good but extremely great awesome ... you know what i like how you think of lines in every single lines there are meanings and no loose strings great job excuse me i want to say "Bravo" 5/5

I love the different appproach you took with this one. It was quite shocking actually to thing of sunset in this way but it was a refreshing read

Another great poem! Everything was there, no need for critisism! I really liked the line He shines over butterfly tombs! Wish I had thought of something like that!

-annmarie

Wow, what an awesome poem. I feel like I'm there to witness this all! Love your work!

XDarkSuicidex --
5/5, definitely! The flow and rhyming wasn`t so forced ;; which allowed for easier reading. This was definitely a boost in my impression of you ;; you did a wonderful job. I loved how you rhymed every line per stanza ;; most people can`t pull that off. You did a great job.

Samantha Hollywood

5/5.. Another great poem.. Im speechless on these~

Okay, I'm loss for words...LOL Keep up the good work sweetie!!

Wow. Great write. I really didn't know what it meant the first time I read it through, but I read it through twice after and I finally got it lol. I liked the flow a lot, and it gave me a great impression on the poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, its kinda sad, but i liked it. it seemed to flow effortlessly. good job.
Driver

Another brilliant poem! the descriptions were amazing.. so beautiful and strong.. the imagery in this piece was stunning! wonderful work! 5/5

Wow, this was so thought provoking! I loved the percepective you to took on writing this and the intimidation that the moon and the stars have on sun really made sense. I really loved this piece

Lovely. I liked it, haven't read very many nature poems cause not alot are good, or they over do it. But I really liked this one.

Thats a nice poem!

Thanks for the coment om my poems!

Wow amazing wording..it was just WOW! it had such detailing it really painted a picture...amazing. 5/5

I LOVED IT!!!!
wow..it was short but so provoking!!
*stares at poem not knowing what to say*
5/5 for sure!!!
my favourite lines were:
"They watch closely as the moon comes to defy,
Witnessing silently as the burning sun dies. "
They made the image so clear!!=D
Absolutly Fantastic Job!!