Comments : Written on the Wall of the Unconcious Mind

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, that was really good, it was short but powerful and i enjoyed reading it, keep it up, my freind
    xxxxxx

  • Great job! its really nicely written i really like it xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I know that's why I write some of my sad poetry. To forget things. Good stuff. Short, Simple but straight to the point.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    I can definetley relate to this, it was sad but also kind of different just like the other one..i really liked this one yes, it is short but sometimes the shorter the better! 5/5