Twilight Haiku

by sibyllene   Jul 24, 2006


The last day bird calls
a single sigh to the dark-
twilight seeps away

Wrapped in airy silk
tight like a guilty embrace-
cool and tangled night

A sliver of light
shot like a silver arrow-
the moon rises up

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    A sliver of light
    shot like a silver arrow-
    the moon rises up
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    Loved those lines above!

    This was a really nice set of haiku's. They were beautiful. Nice imagry also. Wonderful job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I thought the imagery in this was beautiful. I liked the way you used 3 stanzas they came together well. I especially loved the vocab choice in the second.

  • 17 years ago

    by livingwith

    I admire your style, in my opinion its all in its own. The way the 3 parts come together, its balance. its really good

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