UNtItLeD ** not finished * *

by Hayley   Jul 24, 2006


Disappointments knocking on your door
Seems I'm not what your looking for
What happened to the way things used to be
How come you cant still love me?
You were my present but now my past
We have no future we just couldnt last
So tonight I'll drink the memory of you away
Praying this feeling of heartbreak wont always stay

Hayley copyright 2006
* this is not close to being finished, i just wanted to put it up so i didn't lose it!!! but I'm working on it, just going Thrpugh to much and its hard to concentrate.. I'd love to get comments on it tho even tho its not finished, any feedback would be appreciated!!!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by JL

    Hey, this is a great start to what will probably be a great poem. If you're super emotional it might help to write it down, poem form or not (i usually find this helps). take care XXXXX
    JL

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    It's realy kool even wen it's not finish :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*rockstar*~

    Its great so far it already sounds lik me and my x that broke up with me today.....but keep working

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