It's a good poem but not really that sad. It does get the pont across, it's an ideal length to get that message through, and it doesn't feel unorganized. But you repeat the words dark, fear, and a couple points more than it's really needed and you might want to upper cae those i's.

Well, I got kind of confused in the beginning but towards the middle I think I got it figured out...But from what I understood it was great, and emotions just poured throughout the whole thing! great job 5/5

I'm not sure I totally got this one but the emotion was clear. I liked the last stanza though.

Pretty good. Though I think you can add more imagery and details to it.

AWW HUN, that was great, I love all of your poems and you ROX my SOX!!!!!!!!!! Great job on another beauty!

AWW HUN, that was great, I love all of your poems and you ROX my SOX!!!!!!!!!! Great job on another beauty!

Beautiful, i can tell we share a great deal. the emotions were so strong almost like you didn't want to write it but was making yourself.