Never read this style: Different I like it. But the thing is I don't know this style. It would help if you leave a brief description of how to write one. Otherwise good.

Omg, This poem, I loved it. Just loved it, it reminded me a lot of someone that I know, it made me smile just for that reason =D it was short but length never matters all that matters is the emotions it has coming through it! it was great 5/5

I use to remember hating doing diamantes for school cause they never seemed to flow for me.. but you do them absolutely awesome.
I like how you put the good and bad things woman feel. Great job.

Wow, this is another great poem. 5/5

I have never read a poem of this style and i must say that i thoroughly enjoyed it. great job! 5/5

Love your work! 5/5 i have a poem pretty much about the same thing, it's called suicide blond... i wrote it when i was in middle school or something... check it out if you want.