Wow.
I love these types of poems.
It was amazing great job.

Wow. This was great. If you're looking for a title.. You could maybe call it 'Liquid Bliss' ..I just thought those two words were great thats all. But it's up to you. ..There's nothing at all in this piece that I would change. Its wonderful the way it is. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow, so short yet so meaningful. ITs absolutely amazing..

Not too bad at all... A lot different from what I normally read, but I really liked it... Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow, a very powerful poem! you are good at that type of poem, you write them with such a good choice of words and they flow really well. I think
supergirl's suggestion of liquid bliss would be a good title. Take care
Polly 5/5

This is very short, but it is very powerful. i cannot think of words to describe how much i enjoyed this poem, so instead i'm just going to put 5/5 [:

Greatly written, short and meaningful just the way i like them, vocab used was great too 5/5