Metal Of Hunger

by Kaylee   Jul 25, 2006


Metal of hunger embraced,
Shadowed residue behind,
Starved ecstasy's skeletal,
....frame,
Unbuttoned mind decreed,
Stained midnight printed,
Ink within hollow breath,
...hushed,
Delicate bookmarked life,
Tattooed on freckled skin,
Slipping curtained sheets,
....within,
Weaving spiderweb poison,
Through emaciated veins,
Handcuffed needle hands,
...searching

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    I'd wager good money that I get a different message as a reader than you get as the poet. If I read it again then I am sure I'd get a different vision again.

    That can only be a good thing.

    Bret

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The language is great and i love the imagery it creates.

    -biscuit-

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I`m not really sure that I get the meaning of this, although I think I know what its referring to. I enjoyed the challenge to my mind though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Its filled with so much emotions! I wonder if I can ever match you. Hahaha. Great one. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, I didn't quite understand the whole thing though. Maybe you can find a way to keeping writing this style but also making it less complex. Great vocab

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