Enclave (Cinquian)

by sibyllene   Jul 25, 2006


Shyly
like russet deer
we drop footfalls around
the fire's heart, as its ring of light
protects

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nice Cinquian! Your choice of wording was great! I wouldn't change it at all. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Hmm different. It's s nice little snapshot and says a lot for such a short piece. I don't know if it could be a bit longer or whether that would ruin it but the image is great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    I found this very simple and yet very powerful...it was nice and unique