This was very good..very dark....and I liked it : ) 5/5

Wow i liked this poem your really good :):)

please comment on my poems i like to have feedback thanx xxx alex xxx

I don't think you followed the format in this one. The rhyme scheme is suppose to be 'abababcc'. You might need to change up the last words in some of your lines. Try not to change the poem to much, I actually like it the way it is, but it really doesn't follow the Ottava Rima format.

Very nice poem. But I think you got it a tad mixed up, The rhyming scheme isn't how it's intended to be in a Ottava Rima.

However, the poem itself was good. I really liked it. Great use of vocab. Nothing I would change. {cept for the whole Ottava Rima thing} Keep it up!

Natalie``

Not sure of the rules for the whole ottava rima thing but I have to admit the rhyme scheme is a little rocky :(
However, the content is great and so lovely and dark that I still like it.

I don't know much on the format but the poem itself is pretty good with it's descriptions and even emotions are nic. I especially love the title and I think it's better than how I thought it'd be.

Wow, this is an amazing poem, and I really mean it. It's short and you described these "Rusting Angels" beautifully and perfectly. I loved your word choice, and of course your descriptions of how they're hopeless and so broken.
Once again, I love your title, very original, one of the reasons I read the poem.

Great job! 5/5

XoXo
Gaby

Oh I like this poem lol. the flow was a bit rocky in some places, but followed through near the end. I liked the rhyming scheme, and I liked the way you expressed yourself lol. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I really liked this poem, i love reading dark ones. I loved the imagery you used, it really rbought the poem to life. At first, i didn't notice it rhymed, but then i kind of caught it in the end, which is good because it shows that the rhymes weren't force.

great work

-Steph

Another excellent poem! I really liked it very unique and well written! The flow once again was really good! The description of the poem was also really good!

I love trying to understand your poems. I first thought ,why so short
but then I realized it just leaves me wanting to read more. I can tell your good I`d like to hear your comments

Wow, what a great poem this is!! Very nice work

Thankyou for commenting my poem and wow...thats amazing this poem is so meaningful.....wow
great job

XDarkSuicidex --
What a great poem! This was wonderful. The flow was great, and even though the rhyming pattern kind of faded halfway through the poem, I still gave it a 5/5. It was nice ;; a nice theme, very clear and not vague. You did a great job. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

5/5.. Great Poem!

Damn---This gave me shivers---wow I dont even know what to say; This is one of my favorites from you,,,Amazing job, Its perfect! wow...

5/5 The amount of talent you have is never-ending; I dont think I've ever read a poem from you that hasn't taken my breath away---

I really loved this poem. I think your style is amazing. I like poems like this that you have to think about the meaning, and it puts you into the poem. Awesome 5/5 Loretta

Great poem... well thought out and constructed... really liked it... keep it up
Driver

Hi..sorry you didnt win..i hope no hard feelings..i liked ur but u must understand it was hard 2 choose..i give u a comment tho out of love:)

anyway, this was really good! it painted a good picture! 5/5 GR8 job!!!!!!

...its beautiful.... its just.. so.. beautoful... i just wrote a few new poems and it'd be awasome iof you'd check them out... thanks...
-Marina