Comments : Friends!

  • 17 years ago

    by herewithme

    Heyyy thanks a bundle for the comments :P

    i like your writing, but you need to move on a bit from the subjects you're on now.

    nice work considering you're so young.
    keep writing, dont give up...no matter what
    kat - xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a nice poem! but you should change thik to think :)

    keep it up!