That is absolutely beautiful! What a sweet comparison. Even though it has its funny moments (getting pushed out of bed ^_^), it is so adorable and from the heart. ' _^ xxx

I thought it was sweet, it was funny in places but had that real pleasure about it, it made me smile and thats the best thing about it.
well done

"when you
love something
it can never be replaced."

I really liked these lines. I didn't think this poem flowed very well, maybe try dividing it up into more defined stanzas/lines, so you don't have to hunt for the rhythm as much. I did like some of the rhymes you used though.

--Steph

Awww, great poem with indeed feelings

Biscuit --
I had to give this poem a 4/5, and I was being somewhat generous. The flow of this poem wasn`t great, honestly. I don`t want to sound rude, but, it just wasn`t steady and it really distracts the reader when there is an unsteady flow. That definitely needs some work. Why do some of your stanzas have four lines, some 5 lines, and some like 15 lines? That just doesn`t make any sense ;; that`s not a proper format. Consider revising, please.
The rhyming was another reason I bumped you. One stanza rhymed, and the rest didn`t. That`s really not how it works. Either make it ALL rhyme, or none of it. That`s how it works.
I think that though you definitely need some improvement on this, you did an alright job. I`ll go do a couple more of your poems, I think I`ve done a few in the past.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Hi, I gave you a 4/5. I think that you need to work on your style. Freestyle is great, but having part of a poem in nfreestye and part of it rhyming is confusing. Poetry should flow. I am going to read some more of your stuff. Please remember I am not dissing u, just trying to give u a little structure. Kepp writing, it will come. Lretta

THis isn't too bad.. I like the message, at least... But the flow was battered and it just didn't seem there at all.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

You are not sure about the poem your self! Girl this poem is good,,, especialy that you used the teddy bear to discribe your love for scott,,, i liked it alot

Keep up the good work!

I like how you compared your bf (i think) to a teddy bear. Its true..no matter how old your teddy bear gets you love him even more so as time goes by. And that was expressed really nicely. Its like a never giving up on love no matter what happens sortof thing as i understood...that might not be what u were saying but thats what i got out of it . Its a really good poem dont worry...you're not losing it.=D

It says everything you want it to and that's what counts. No one writes perfect prose every time out but as long as learn from each poem strive to learn from each poem and try something new or make an old theme better next time then you're bettering yourself and your work.

I liked the simple comparisons. This poem doesn't pretend to be something it is not and you can proud of that.

Very cute poem, I also wrote a poem having the words Teddy Bear in it. Great job it flowed very well together.
5/5