Comments : Last thought of the deceased

  • 17 years ago

    by Kitten3

    This poem is amazing. I just don't know what to say. I felt your pain with every word you wrote. You have unmeasured talent that could really touch lifes. Well good luck and i hope it gets better.

  • 17 years ago

    by beth

    'she said Ill lose it all.'
    I love that line, it's a great ending to a good poem, i like it.