Comments : The Pain Inside

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Oh, how sad! It portrayed your pain perfectly, the agony of living without...

    I loved the last line, how it's like the pain and emotion were building up, consuming everything, and then..someone opened a door, and it all came gushing out.

    Beautiful!

    //T.L.//

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey cool poem
    nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
    if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
    ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
    thanksss :)