Comments : Chesapeake Bay

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww. that was very sweet! i loved the last stanza, the last line was very moving.. this poem was quite random but i liked that.. lovely job! 5/5 p.s. nice to see you again :)

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    "for as long as there is water to dream on." oh! i like that very much

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "for as long as there is
    water to dream on. "

    That line gave me chills. The entire piece is beautifully reminescent, but you just blew me away with that last line.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    Wow i like this a lot. It is very original. I didn't quite understand the last line actually... hmm... But great work anyway and take care
    Polly

  • 17 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Who was that about?