Comments : 3 Months *No Rhyme*

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Liked!! but thought it was a bit long, n had no rythm/ryme! but thats just me!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Heyy...i liked this peom... even though it was really sad, although it didnt have any rhyming words i liked it coz' it was different from all the others, keep writting. please comment on some of mine.. thanks.. Kirsty Palmer xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    WOW... this one was very very sad! I liked it tho... the different style of rhyming was very good!!!
    Loved it!!!
    5/5

    TORM