Hey..
haven't read ur poems for a long time..i was very much looking forward to reading more..but i did today and nothing could have made me more happier..u know..u are getting to think like me...iam a fairy tale person....so many people critics on ur poem..i do agree with most of them..not that ur poem is not good....i love the whole idea..meeting a strange and thinking her to be a princess....but isn't there something evil about her..i mean u could have made it longer..and then explain how and why does this stranger makes u so happy...truely iam happy for u that u r starting to write happy ending poem..iam so very happy..by the way how come u don't write me...i will write u today or tomorro..keep the wonderful work up sir...

This poem was very interestng and somehow different. good work. Putting everything into a small poem is hard but you seem to have that skill down pat:):)

Ok, let me have something to say about some of the comments, specially FARAH's comment.
you know nothing else could make me happier when I saw your comment.thank you very much.
As far as the poem goes, don't you think I will be lost in my words if i make it longer?
and when a person is in love, the world is a brither place for them, they find beauty in everything so what can i find evil about a person that my heart adore?
thank you again and hope to see your new poems as well and keep n touch.

Oh goran..now u make me feel guilty for saying such a thing...i would not for the world say anything that i could know of that would make u think of unpleasnt thing and take ur smile away..thats a promise i will make to u...Love is blind and i don't blame u..u will only see wat ur baby heart wants to see and believe...am i right sir...to see u happy is my own happiness. ur friendship is a gift i will hold dear and close to my heart..as for my own poetry..i don't have the imagination u have..i will try to write and when i do i will let u know...wish u all the best..and do keep in touch.

Hahahaa
I never said you took away my smile
lol.
and thank you very much for those great words...
I dont have such word to tell you how much i appriciate your comments.

Can u come online now

Hey again! GREAT JOB! look like your pretty popular with your poems, huh? well, I see why, awesome poem! 5/5

Good write, I think the flow was pretty ify! Some lines were long, some short.........

Good job,
-AnnMarie

Its love dear.

Do u feel glittered everytime she enters your mind? Do u find beauty in the simplest things around? Do u always get tempted to walk on the way which she frequently visits? Do u get excited when u see just a glimpse of her?

If the answer is no then u have written this poem just for the sake of writing. and if the answer is yes then u know what it means!!!

10/5... 5 for a gr8 poem and 5 for reminding me about my princess. take care.

Nicely done. it left me in suspense to know more, but greatly written. 5/5
Driver

You right in a beautifully unique and that shines out here. Lovely lovely poetry

I love the confused yet joyful atmosphere of your words. It is plain and amazing. As usual, I think I have read many of your poems before. I love your style. Keep it up! xxx

Thank you all, for liking my poem

Hey! sweet poem! i think i read this one but im not sure i commented it! but hey this is a great poem!!i loved it 5/5

And again i loved it!!! i added you to my favourites, keep writing and im going to read some more lol ^^

xoxo Lucy

Verry good poems.... i like the way u r so open about ur feelings... keep it up..

*Deeply

Verry good poems.... i like the way u r so open about ur feelings... keep it up..

*Deeply

Verry good poems.... i like the way u r so open about ur feelings... keep it up..

*Deeply

I like the shortness of it because it adds to the mystery of who this person is which is really effective. I really love all your work and have added you to my favourites!!!

I feel lik this and most of your poems jsut are..no reasoning..no detail...which make thme only half half the beat and hte energy to make it great..but still good one.

Lissa