Awwww..taleee.. you seem so sad these days.. this was beautifully written.. the words you use to describe your feelings are so creative and help us to pinpoint exactly what you are trying to say.. hope you feel better hun.. we all lovee you! 5/5

I can only scrape the surface of what emotion is really written in between these lines, i kno i barely kno u personally, but i can see the sadness that weeps within u and the hunger to speak out...keep it up and u will be ok babe xoxox luv n light, and as much happiness as i can give xoxox courtney!

Wow! Talee, this was great babe..lol i don't understand half of those words tho, i'm not that smart..BUT from what I did understand i loved it, it was very sad but filled with lots of emotions..keep your head up sweetie -hugs- xoxo

To know the deeper meaning would diminish the imagination. I like the mystery. This is a very good write, flows like butter. My favorite liens are:

Covering untruthful fake beauty,
lost within these designed portraits.

Exquisite,
Paggz

Wonderful JoB!! Love all the details you put in!

Wow i love this poem. it is so meaningful. u wrote this so well. it has great rhythm and flow and word choice.. i kno how u feel. i can relate. u have so much talent. i wish i could write like you!!! well great job and keep it up 5/5
take care and stay strong
angie

Talee --
Wow, this had a LOT of emotion put into it ;; and it was wonderful. You used very good vocabulary, and the rhyming worked out well. The flow, grammar, and spelling were also perfect. I think that you did a wonderful job on this ;; don`t change anything about it, it`s absolutely perfect. It will definitely be top rated, as the majority of your poems are. =D Great job, 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Hey darl wow this poem was like very deep & p0werful. the w0rds y0u used t0 describe urself was great!! a great c0mbinati0n. very t0uching and sad th0ugh. xx

This was really good, it was an awesome piece. I loved the words you used, the imagery was brilliant. the poem was great overall, well done and thanks for the comment on my poem
xxxxxx

AMAZING!!!
That was so damn good!!!
I liked the vocabulary you used in it!
And the grammer, n spellings were perfect!!!
There was soo much emotion in it!!!
Very GREAT indeed!!!5/5
Take Care

Torm
xxx

Wow, very beautiful poem. I believe when you read it, you know pretty much what is going on. Awesome job!

So beautifully written. I could feel the sorrow and emotion deep within your words and it almost burns an equal sadness in my heart. You used great word choice, and created powerful poetry. To me, I know your talent will never be forgotten. Keep it up! 5/5

Wow, this poem is captivating... i can relate to this in my past, but ive worked past it... well written and constructed... great job...
Driver

It is a nice poem, but honestly too deep for me to understand it well, but it a nice poem

Wow this is such a powerful poem. I love the way you have described your pain in such detail, and although I do not know the true deep meaning behind it all, it adds so mystery to the poem. I really hope you're ok and thanks for commenting my poem,
- Polly x

Awww sis, this is such a sad poem. You really poured your emotions out into this one. You described everything so well. Every adjective you used was well chosen. You also created such a tragic image. *hugs* sis, you know I always get those deeper meanings. I understand.

Wow...this was really good! it had a TON of descriptive words. it painted an amazing picture. great work!!! 5/5

Holy crap, your wording is beyond. Really. I love the-

Surroundings are disappearing,
only revealing bitter friendships.''

Got some of those sights myself.
Brilliant poem. xxx

Amazing. Purley wonderful. The wording of it was perfect, I love it. It kept my attention the whole time; yet again, purely amazing.

Hmmm, this poem definately makes the reader think-- The word choice in this piece is phenomenal; and the emotion has such a dark depth to it---The last line is a great end to the poem; sums up the poem well

Amazing poem---No doubt a 5/5