Awww, that was so sweet. Loved all the details in this, t'was beautiful, Jessy. I also really liked the repitition you had, worked great with the poem. Another beautifuly written piece. Love it. Keep it up and keep smiling. =D 5/5

Natalie``

That is soo cute!! I love the phrases you used to describe him, we get to know him very well. Hope all goes great with you guyz!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey i really liked this 0ne. y0u used a great use 0f w0rds and it was structured beautifully. great j0b!! =) xx

Aww. It's so cute! Lol. Very good write, even though it didn't rhyme. >.< I liked the flow in some places, but in others it seemed cramped or you tried to fit too much in. Keep it up! =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Excellent poem! The structure was good and the flow was nice. I reallly liked the topic and how you compared parts of "your man" to sweet things(chocolate coverd starwberries) It really was a very nice poem!

five/5
-annmarie

Aww this reminds me of MY other half... Very sweet and it hit right at home. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Beautifully written. I adore the second stanza...so sweet.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

I loved the descriptions, they were very original and I really felt the love of your poem. My favorite part was the second stanza, especially the two first lines.

Great job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Very passionate!! I love how you are relating different thing to him in different ways-very unique---I also love how every stanza ends in "My love, my life, my man, my other half.."-It helps make the poem stringer and gets your message across

5/5 Keep it up--

I love this poem, since my boyfriend and I got ina huge fight over something he said out of anger, and I felt like so hopeless..this poem makes me feel better though reminds me of him and just how much I love him, and that I know he was sorry for what he said.. Lovely poem it really is fantastic you are very talanted.

This was good...

Wow this is so sweet! The repetition of the line:
"My love, my life, my man, my other half.. " was so effective, and I really like the way you compareed him to so many other things. A great poem =D
- Polly

Thats so cute!
XoXo acidrain

The poem is an experience of every married woman in the world. it is appealing to read. rg.vijay

Wow Great Poem
This is one of the best poem which i read in this club.
500/500

I think this is a great poem..and for all of you losers who voted less than a 5 have no idea what real poetry's about...i mean..its beautiful..with repitition in each stanza and the pretty imagery...how could anyone not see it? i think it was a great poem...i really really love it. good job jess :) and dont look at the other ratings..their just jelous they cant write like you ;) hehe

This is the first time i have read one of your poems but ive noticed that your name keeps appearing repeatedly so i thought id give you a go now i know why lol your poem is really in depth and good i loved it anyways :):):)

Would you read my poemsp lz i like as much feedback as poss fanx XxX AlEx XxX

Wow! taht was so cute!
i love it!
beautiful imagery

Awe that's really cute .. well i hope you guys do get married ... i really like'd that poem.. keep it up.. your good at them

AWW DIS SO SWEET..
I LUV IT