One last time

by xXBlεεdingMαscαяαXx   Jul 30, 2006


She sits alone staring at the bottle,
Shaking as she goes for another drink,
One last time,
Drinking to ease her pain and fears,
As her mascara tears fall down her cheeks,
One last time,
She scareams her heart out,
With the music loud,
She screams she loves him,
One last time,
She pretends everything will be fine,
With her plastered smile,
As the pain just seems to grow.
One last time.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Devyn

    I can't explain what I think of it.... It's so good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady in Red

    Wow. That was amazing I love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥ღ alwayz... forgotten ღ♥

    Aw wow i luv this so much ,, dont change it its so perfect .... 5.5

    -xx- leah -xx-

  • 17 years ago

    by gabbyblueskies

    Pretty good, i like how you wrote it. short and deep. keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Asingletear

    Hi i agree is a well good poem, but last line i wod say needs a rewording a bit, mayb "she left herself crushed in his hands" if thats what you are trying to say, is cool if not i tend 2 interpret things wierrdly.

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