Delicate Rose

by Jessica   Jul 30, 2006


From the first day we met
Our tiny seed of love was planted
Night and day it slowly grew
So stunning we thought it was enchanted..

It never lost a silky petal
And the sharp thorns never hurt
The emerald green stalk grew
Absorbing all love from the dirt..

Then one hot sunny day
The ruby rose promptly woke
Bees kissed their way into the flower
And the relationship quickly broke..

Apologies were cried but were too late
The scarlet petals started to die
Loosing their once striking colour
And sadly forcing them to say goodbye..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sophie

    Super sweet poem joined with sorrow.

    i love it!!

    awesome use of words and it had a great flow!

    sophie:)

    p.s thanx for the poem ..i appreciate ur opinion!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Nice! its cool how your poem flowed all together! good job!

    thanks for the comment on my poem! it means alot to me!

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by gabrielle.Xx

    Awwwwww.. thats so nice and well written!! please chekout my poems.. my favourite poem is tattered and torn.. please chek out that one and any others!! X

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Wow...this so beautiful! it painted a pretty picture in my mind... the endign was awesome and sad! but this poem is very good...the flow was great as well as the rhyming!! great work indeed!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww this is so sad in the end, but I loved the details you used in this poem, it truely was beautiful. I could see and feel the rose as if i were really there, great work.

    --Steph

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