Comments : Delicate Rose

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Oh, that was sad... the only thing i would change would be using "once" two times close togethr in the last stanza, but besides that, nothing. you painted a lovely picture : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw, wow. Jessy. This was really sad. Loved how you used all the nature in this though, made it sound really beautiful. Lovely job. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Very good write. It sums up how mucha person means to you. =) I liked the flow, and the rhyming scheme was very good. Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    This poem was good! The flow seemed a little forced every now and then. The structure of the poem was good and the topic was unique,

    good job
    -AnnMarie

  • Sad..great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Driver

    I liked this poem. the rhyming scheme kinda wavered, but it was overall good. you put emotions into it and thats what counts. ive been through this, it gets better. good job.
    Driver

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Aww that was really cute...your imagery and descriptions were amazing..your emotions really shined through your words..great job

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow.. This paints such a wonderful picture I don't know what else to say... I could imgine everything through the poem. Beautifully written.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, this could be in the lost love section too.

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Absolutely heartbreaking. I love the imagery you created with your words, flawless!
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I think it was a nice comparison between a relationship and a rose, beautifully done. It could also work with friendship.
    The third stanza kind of distracted me of the piece, but maybe it was necessary for the poem.

    Good job!

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Amazing write! I love it! Every stanza is so powerful in describing your love-- My favorite one is:

    "It never lost a silky petal
    And the sharp thorns never hurt
    The emerald green stalk grew
    Absorbing all love from the dirt.."

    ^^AMAZING!

    Great work--no doubt a 5/5 on the poem =-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet MeMoRiEs

    This is a beautiful poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I've never read a nature poem that appeared to be sad, but you really did bring emotions into this poem. Really well done, loved the imagery.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Yet again another purely amazingly fantastic poem. It had great emotion and was really a lovely read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jasmyn

    This was good

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    I love how you showed a relationship with a flower... Very unique... The flow of the poem was great and I could relate to what you were saying... Take care 5/5
    - Polly

  • 17 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Hehe. another adorably cute poem! reading your poems really are a pleasure...i know i used to give you a hard time about them before..but i'm soo so sorry about that..you do have a real talent for poetry, and i think you should pursue it..your an amazing poet and a lovely person..great poem by the way :) ...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    ~ Congratulations once again for winning my contest...with this very poem to be exact!! I really did think it was a wonderful interpretation. Good Work

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This poem is really beautiful!