Beautifully written, but very sad--- I love how you begin this poem; it really catches the readers attention and makes them want to know why the blind man is looking out the window--The emotion in this piece is clear and strongly expressed---Great write--

5/5

Aww..this was so sad and sweet, i liked how it was short, but had alot of meaning and depth to it. You certainly are good at writting ottava rhymes, great work.

--Steph

Very heartfelt. You have so much talent. Keep up the good work! 5/5 Loretta

Great write again. I liked it a lot, even though it's another short one lol. You do such an excellent job expressing yourself in short poems. It's great talent to have. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This was an excellent one as well. good rhyme scheme, it all flowed nicely. keep em comin.
Driver

Very strong emotions in this poem, conveyed very well, brilliant language. u r very talented.

-biscuit-

Nice job, great flow. I think you can put my details into it and make it longer

First of all I love that film!
But back to your poem, it was brilliant, Iloved the first 2 lines especially. This poem was very sad but that's what made it good. Loved this one and a great tribute to the film

Ohmy.. I almost cried, and I don't cry over stuff usually. But it was really good, if it can bring tears to my eyes, then it must be good. Love it. Great job.

This was a good poem! you did a good job on it,,, :)

Sheena --
You did a great job here! I love ottava rima`s. The other poem you wanted me to r/r/c I`ve already done, so if there is another one you`d like r/r/c`d, please post it. Not in the mood to search for a random poem. =D But back to the poem..
When people write specific kinds of poetry, its hard to judge the flow and the rhyming because its preset. But you did a wonderful job on all of it ;; not much more to say! Keep it up.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Wow gr8 work! it was just wowie! i serious don't know how u do it! i loved the wording, and i kno this is hard to write i tried, lol but u made it gr8! 5/5

~*Who Cares?*~
Btw i already did rusting angels, and i cant do there is where cuz its love...

Very good poem!!5/5!
I loved the last 4 lines:
"Crying softly for his son, the tears fall slow.
Remembering his home the son will find,
His crying father from many years ago,
Now telling his father he is not alone."
They almost made me cry='(
EXCELLENT poem!!!

This is good. It tells a story in such little words, but it really leaves me wanting to know more about the whole situation... Perhaps you could try making it into a different sort of poem and expand it a bit?
- Polly

Awh, another amazing poem. It was utterly sad, I enjoyed reading it though. The flow was good too. :]

Wow. I watched that movie years ago.. and they should of put this poem on the movie!!