Omg this is amazing!! i loved the rhyming in it and the way you wrote it. its very original. defiantly keep writing. you have talent. 5/5

Wow.. loved this poem,.. nice to read.. and i loved the ending! your very talented.. keep writting..5/5.. please read and comment on my poems.. thanks kirsty palmer xx

Just like everyone else thought, this was amazing, i cant explain how much i love it! great job, love and luck, mollyjade

Wow. just wow. amazing! such wonderous wording. and details were gr8 too! 5/5

WOW!! That's REALLY awesome. you do a really good job of really putting each thing into perspective..
keep up the writing
Raquel

Well i cant give any bad words about thisp oem its short but really good i loved it nothing could have improved it well done :):):) xxx alex xxx

Ii LiiKED iiT

Exellent. I love the personification of the aspects of life and the rhythm scheme it's simple and flows great and gives the whole thing a feel that ties the poem together. gave it a five please keep it up.

Wow this is great! I love the way you have described all the different feelings in just four lines - very effective! And the ending was good, it wrapped up the whole thing... 5/5
Polly

Truly a simple and lovely poem!

I liked this poem. Everything tied so well together. Well done!

This is one of the most wonderful poems I have read. The wisdom that comes from your words and how it flows is amazing. All in all everyone of us is everything, all connected, all flowing together to make the harmony of life, and this captures that message wonderfully. Thank you. Chris

This is one of the best pieces of creative writing I have seen in a long time. very well done. the descriptions of each emotion are simply outstanding.

peace
shobhana

This poem has a nice ring to it,and ur an amazing writer, keep it up

WOW. i loved the flow... it was absotively great. I liked the last verse the best, but the whole entire poem was fantastic! i liked how you described all the traits of different traits.

5/5
-ARP

Excellent poem.. great job 5/5 xx

Wow! thats awsome!! great poem keep it up

I loved it, cannot believe i have never read this before now, it is awesome
keep it up, my friend
xxxxx

This is the most creative poem i have ever read. i did not want it to end! so beautiful very well written you should be proud!:) amazing job keep it up..smile*

Different but I liked the idea especially when at first it seems your describing the final thing in each stanza but really you're defining parts of life. It just flowed well and it felt like you could sing along to it a bit.