SWEET PENNED

Wow.. such a beautifully written poem, i love the way you write, and express yourself! and a very discriptive, and heartfelt poem.. great write! One of the sweetest ive read in a long time!! keep it up 5/5..(wish i could go higher!) please read and comment on my poems, thanks, kirsty palmer xx

Wow.. such a beautifully written poem, i love the way you write, and express yourself! and a very discriptive, and heartfelt poem.. great write! One of the sweetest ive read in a long time!! keep it up 5/5..(wish i could go higher!) please read and comment on my poems, thanks, kirsty palmer xx

Im jealous i wish i could write as good as this :(:(:(:(

would you read my poems and tell me how to improve xxx thnx xxx

That was just angelic.:)

I love the way you express yourself and describe things!!! You are soooooooooooo good! 5/5

Wow. That was awesome. I loved every part of this poem. It was sweet, and very heart touching. Awh.. I feel like re-reading it. :] Great Job Deary.

Inticing, seductive poem. Beautifully written and put together. The flow was nearly perfect and it was quite original, for a love poem.
5/5

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Awesome the first stanza was very very good starter and the third stanza was great also i love those stanze and hey a very good emotion and vivid details great piece

geneross

Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that.

WOOOOOOW! :X nice work.