Comments : Upon a lover's ideal

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Really sweet. i loved all the analogies adn especially the line "sweet teardrops of the sunlight". man, that was soooo beautiful. i adored this poem. 100% brilliant : )

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This is a beautiful poem..i liked it..

  • 17 years ago

    by Loulou

    This was a great poem and i am sorry i took so long. This poem is so beautiful!!!! i am glad you entered my contest with it!!!!