Comments : X special not special needs x

  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Aww this is soo sweet and has such great meaning. i love this poem and all that it stands for, nice =]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    It is a sweet emotion written down in a piece of paper.It describe a feeling, a beautiful one that a person has

    I like this poem as it shows love, beside all the pain and sorrows ppl go through there is some thing which will remain in ppl's heart and it is love
    that love can be for a person any person, mother, brother, dad, friend, boyfriend, girlfriend.
    in this one it is for a brother.
    well written and i look forword to see your other great works as well.
    take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Aw, that is so special. I bet he thinks he hast the best sister in the whole world.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Beautiful poem about such an important issue. Really humbling and I'm glad I got the chance to read this :) This is the most heartfelt poem I've read in a long time.
    A few literary corrections which I'm sure you know:
    I'd, he'll and there was one more which I can't remember. Very minor and I'm just being pedantic.

  • 17 years ago

    by Antithesis

    Thnx for commenting on my poems...anw,i gotta say u're just like any normal girl...but i dont think i understand all ur poems much cuz i dont really know much bout lovey dovey stuff...but good attempt...!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jae

    This is an amazing poem! I understand how u feel about ur brother, believe me, im the oldest of seven, and i feel like most of them are mine!

    Keep writing, and tell Danny i said HI!

    Jay

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    Wow this poem touches you somewear special

    well done grl

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    Thats beautiful. i love it. i wisi i could say the same about my brother. love willow xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by $Ms.Bossy$

    That is an awesome poem. I love the everything about your poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    Wow. that was just really heartfelt and full of love. the rhyming was great, and not forced. the topic was very touching and true. good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by ! CLAIREEE.

    Awww ... this is soo cute !! and very deptful. i loved it. the flow was great... and it rhymed perfectly. you a wonderful poet. keep up the good work !!

    .Much Love. .Take Care.

    [Claire Louise !!] x o x o

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    This poem made me smile-- and that's saying something! I really love the meaning, and you captured the true nature of people with autism excellently.

    5/5 definitely

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is really sweet and has a great meaning behind it.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Loved the flow within this poem, great job. You have a way with words, excellent work and keep it comming.

    Peace, Joe

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw such a sweet poem. I really enjoyed this it brightened up my day. Just because someone has special needs doesn't mean that they can't make something of themselves. I hate labels and this poem
    helped to shatter some of the ones that people have already created. I just wish
    that more people were able to see things the way that you do. Maybe eventually the world will see things in this light instead of judging people for their differences.
    I have just a few spelling corrections, stanza four Hell should be he'll. I also think that the last stanza needs a little bit of work. I really liked the message that you were trying to send with it but the line "and lives life to the full" doesn't really sound righ to me. Sweet poem and I hope that Danny knows how much he is loved because I can tell how much just by reading this poem.