Wow! This was amasing, one of the best I've read in a long time. You have a talent for dark poetry, and i really loved the theme and idea of this poem. Great work, you mastered this very well.

--Steph

I thought this poem was amazing. I found one mistake. "special p;ace" Should be place? I think. Other than that it was amazing.

"
For where there is doubt then so am I
Shrouded in darkness. Secret spy.
Ready to lure with promises wild
Another precious heavenly child. "

My favorit stanza out of all of them. I thought it was touching and beautifully written.

Excellent job throughout the poem. There's one spot that says "p;ace. I think you mean't place.^-^
Also try not to use same rhymes. Keep it up!!

Awsome! at first i wanted to stop reading, but i couldnt for the words flowed like a song,,, i had to read it to the end,,, well i love to read dark poems! but i love your funny ones :D

Wow...I loved it... It was so dark and wonderful and so well written! Excellent job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

A very dark poem, flowed well, very sad and meaningful, imagery is awesome throughout, a good read
xxxxxx

Heidi, this one is really good, I don't know why it scared me a little, I'm trying to find something new to write about, I hope I can. But this one is really good too.

Wow, im impressed. this has to be one of the best ive ever read. it seems so flawless. the rhyming and flow of words seemed so smoothly written. excellent job.
Driver

Ahh, without the darkness, there would be no light, but without light, there would be no darkness. This is a well balanced piece that flows like silk.

Paggz

For you I have a special p;ace
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You need to fix the word place babe!

but other then that i loved this poem i am completely speechelss though none of your rhymes seemed forced it flowed perfectly..i absolutely LOVED this poem!! great great job 10/10...=D

For you I have a special p;ace

[[Think you're meant to have "place" there instead of "p;ace"]]

I thought this poem was pretty damn good. I loved the flow in this, and I honestly didn't think the rhyming sounded forced at all. It was very nicely written. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

WOW!!! i loved this, its the best poem i have read in quite some time!!! excellent work!!!!

xoxo Lucy

I'm speechless. It all flows together perfectly. It's such a dark poem that it gives me chills. That's talent. I loved it 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

Beautifully written and you make your point well. I love it.

This was a pretty good poem. Really dark. A lot of vivd images jumping out at the readers, which is great for those people who get a thrill reading. I just thought the last line wasn't a great finisher, but still a great poem.

Wow... that was VERY good! Started out strong, which usually means it falls flat later on, but you kept it up beautifully... 5/5, and an add as a favorite. Keep it up!

I am overwhelmed by the strong message of this dark poem
Plus the rhythm and rhyme is perfect