AMen Brotha! Thats amazing! I believe in everything you just said..Im a christian and we sing songs like that all the time! Wonderfully written!
-Krissey

P,S would appreciate if you read Painted Cardboard Shoes

When the wind blows against your heart,
And you don't know where you are,

These are my favorite lines.. They're very strong and they tell so much with just a few lines. This poem is really good... So strong and loving. Great job. God is proud, I'm sure. =)

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Great write

Very good!! Wow. I loved it. It sounds like you're either describing a close friend or God. or both.

Great jo and great poem! i like the flow it was so great, i think its written well so just keep on writing and i believe u can write more... 5/5

god bless

Ohmygod. That poem was amazing. It was so beautifully written. I thought you did a great job, the flow was perfect. I only found one error.

"You can always rest you head awhile"

Should be.

"You can always rest your head awhile"

Aww 5/5 GREAT POEM! your a talented writer. And thank you for commenting Battle to love eachother!

Beautiful poem...Thats a very cute poem, it's such a pleasure to read. I loved your wording and the ending:)

Amazing... It's an awesome poem, definitely one of the best I've ever read! *hugz* Hope to see more of your work soon!

Hey um i would love to chat if you would e-mail me at willwonme@yahoo.com!

Hey, this is good. I really liked it. I usually have issues with people who use their poetry to preach but this is so simply just your opinion. I dont kow how to word it, but it's just nice to read. The voice of your words sound so steady, good job!

That's awsome how you write...its beautiful poem... i love it.. well take care.... much love kaydee

Hmm. This was quite inspirational.. The flow was pretty good, the emotion clear, and the descriptions worked well.. Nicely done! 5/5

Very beautiful. Full of inspiring words to describe God. 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

U r a rele good writer ... and this one i like the most ..

Wonderfully written, but what about people who have no faith?

this is my favourite so far.

I liked this one alot, it had some real meaning behind it and everything i read right now jsut makes me miss my grilfriend more and more, i think i should go to bed, haha 5/5

This poem is awesome! i can really feel the passion and strength of your faith and friendship with God and it really shines through your poem. an amazing piece of work! thankyou. xXx