That was really deep and descriptive...i really liked it

Wow.. very creative, andvery deep, it had the power to captivate me! well written, it made evrything hectic in my life just stand still and calm whilst reading. your a true writter and have great talent! keep it up..please read and commen on my poems..thanks..Kirsty Palmer xx

Wow that was awesome
i loved the vocab that u used it was very mature. well done it was written well.

sophie:)

p.s please comment or vote on some of mi poems :)

I think that was really good! I can only ever come up with a couple lines on this subject, never a whole poem. Great job!
~Jules