Comments : Day Dreaming

  • 17 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    Vincey vincey ..vincey.. u continue to amaze me with ur poetry. honestly this is amazing n i can totally hear a beat in the background n everything. i really like the lines:
    Three months since we've actually spoken,
    I'm still hurt but my heart's not broken,
    Just in uncomfortable pain.
    thers so much behind it i love it. i think this is about rebecca but i could be wrong. the chorus is crazy every1 can relate to this song. totally love it. u should be so proud of urself cause i knoe i am! great intro n nice finish.:) good job my vincey:> love you keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sadly in love

    This is BEAUTIFUL....and yea srry i didnt no your poem was titled that lol..well yea this poem is great ok.