Wow i absolutely loved this poem.. I can relate to it alot...it brought tears to my eyes and made me think of my past i felt tons of emotions with this write..you were very descriptive and your imagery was pefect..it was great all i can really say is wow! definitely 5/5
You did a great job on this. I wasn`t really feeling the slang, beacuse this poem was so strong. Maybe you could fix that ;; I can`t imagine a lot of people coming into this category. But maybe they do. Anyway, you did a terrific job. 5/5
Wow! your a very talented poet! you are gifted! did this really happen to you? because the way you expressed it seemed so real that it mustve happened to you! this poem touched me! my mum had a similar experience to that young girl in the poem and its comforting knowing what my mum mightve felt. i know how i might be able to comfort her! anyways, your awesome! mwahmwah!
love from shae-natasha gilliland
I never even had a chance to fight
Aww that was really sad and emotional. It really sucked me in. I have many friends that have been in the same situation. I LOVED UR POEM!! Im going to read more by you and would love if you would comment on mine! Thanks 6/5