Comments : Kidnapped and Alive

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Wow i absolutely loved this poem.. I can relate to it alot...it brought tears to my eyes and made me think of my past i felt tons of emotions with this write..you were very descriptive and your imagery was pefect..it was great all i can really say is wow! definitely 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by gabrielle.Xx

    Omg that poem is soo good darlinn.. soo good!! if this really happened to you then i am soo sorry and you neva deserved it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Krissey --
    You did a great job on this. I wasn`t really feeling the slang, beacuse this poem was so strong. Maybe you could fix that ;; I can`t imagine a lot of people coming into this category. But maybe they do. Anyway, you did a terrific job. 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 11 years ago

    by $Ms.Bossy$

    I really like your poem. I really do. It's really nice.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. I absolutely love this poem. You described everything so perfectly and it was so sad it made me cry. You did a great job on this. The flow and rhythm was perfect. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Wonderful, truly amazing. This was beautiful, and did stir emotion within me. I think that the subconscious just knows when you're safe, and mum, in the poem, is exactly that.. Well done. xx

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    Awww i loved this, keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    That is sad at start but happy at end....

  • 11 years ago

    by *shae-natasha*

    Wow! your a very talented poet! you are gifted! did this really happen to you? because the way you expressed it seemed so real that it mustve happened to you! this poem touched me! my mum had a similar experience to that young girl in the poem and its comforting knowing what my mum mightve felt. i know how i might be able to comfort her! anyways, your awesome! mwahmwah!
    love from shae-natasha gilliland

    xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by tracyy

    Wow that was great! i dont really comment on peoples poems but yours was great.
    keep up the good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Breeanna

    Wow...

  • 11 years ago

    by never

    You bring something new to poetry
    "call that life"

  • 11 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    I never even had a chance to fight
    Aww that was really sad and emotional. It really sucked me in. I have many friends that have been in the same situation. I LOVED UR POEM!! Im going to read more by you and would love if you would comment on mine! Thanks 6/5

  • 11 years ago

    by *unpredictable*

    Omg amazing. if it's true, i'm so sorry. if it's even basesd on something true, i'm sory. it was amazing!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Colossus

    Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Layla

    Terrific poem- descriptive and down-to-earth.

  • 11 years ago

    by Danielle

    Alsome as usual!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by SadKuteAngel

    Kool kool l...love it

  • 10 years ago

    by SadKuteAngel

    Kool kool l...love it

  • 10 years ago

    by jennifer

    What a amazing poem, I really loved it so much amazing words