I didn't like the ending.. 'I'm so over you!' No. And maybe if you took away all the ... at the ends of the lines it'd have more effect, but this was a rather good poem. It told a lot. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Haha that last part made me chuckle with the whole "screw your fake apology"...thats really what us girls need to feel like when a guy screws with our emotions...there is honestly plenty of fish in the sea and there is the right man for everyone, just gotta search hard! I loved this poem! Amazing write!
-Krissey

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Haha that last part made me chuckle with the whole "screw your fake apology"...thats really what us girls need to feel like when a guy screws with our emotions...there is honestly plenty of fish in the sea and there is the right man for everyone, just gotta search hard! I loved this poem! Amazing write!
-Krissey

P.S Would love your feedback On "Kidnapped and Alive"

Haha that last part made me chuckle with the whole "screw your fake apology"...thats really what us girls need to feel like when a guy screws with our emotions...there is honestly plenty of fish in the sea and there is the right man for everyone, just gotta search hard! I loved this poem! Amazing write!
-Krissey

P.S Would love your feedback On "Kidnapped and Alive"

Its different and explains what love's like , i like it

Omg! i loved it , for real!! especially this part!! I even got goosebumps:
make her able to handle you..
to handle all your mistakes..
im not saying im prefect..
bu neither are you..
---i just submitted a new poem, u should check it out and lemme kno what u think--im new at this stuff, lol

I love this, absolutly love it!

keep it up, very good, very very good.

i enjoyed it all. xx

It was pretty good but the ending would be better if she took her life! or even better then that you dont mention her wanting to kill herself, and she could get over him. itd be much better. its kinda what girls need! a know? to read poems about getting over guys, cuz we gotta do that alot cuz guys break our delicate hearts! :(
but anyway, it was ok, i enjoyed it, just those few things...
love from shae-natsha gilliland

xoxo

Great poem!
loved it....

Ooooh... it's rly good!!