Midnight Love

by Drew Gold   Aug 7, 2006


And what a world
it breeds, it needs.

Demons dripping
in abstracted haste,
Dreaming guilt, a
sacrificial taste;
like that of a flame
Constricting our throat

Spitting haze coughing
Smoke -- tendrils
reaching, feeling, inch
by inch, less and
less. Desensitized,

Features are rubbed from
our face -- creatures
Finding love only in
What they take; Raping
our nerves and leaving
them to bleed: Amnesiac

Fiends drugged and unseen.
Dripping imaginitive, ab-
stracted waste. Dreaming
The kill, \'til swords are
drawn and blood is spilt.
Yet still we\'re Bored.

Such daydreams

Midnight Love
can not afford.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lenny

    *writes text review on poem* Yeah no crits! I love the ending, and the occasional use of rhyme. Beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Wow, this is kool job man. Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Holy crap! This was totally awesome... I was VERY rapped up in the entire thing...GREAT JOB! 5/5!
    ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by Lenny

    Oooohhh I liked that. such vivid language, mmmm a joy to read, the description was just so rich. I love it, its so dark and the flow is mmmmm! No crits sorry... Man I suck at crits...