Love Story

by BeautifulxMess   Aug 7, 2006


Soft sweet whispers you tell me in my ear. While kissing my head and holding me close and near.

Laying in the dark, with me in your arms. I don't know how you did it, but you got me with your charm.

There's nowhere I'd rather be, but here in your heart. You keep me warm even when we're apart.

I can still feel you breath down my neck, and kissing my lips. I feel you put your arm around me,
who knew love could feel like this.

Late at night we lay in an open field. Counting the stars one by one, I can never explain this sensational love I feel.

I still taste your sweet kiss, and your warm body against mine.
Chills running down my back, and up through my spine.

You continue to amaze me, and everything you do. I still can't believe I'd ever find you.

To everyone you're just another guy, but to me you're everything.
You may be just one person, but you mean the world to me.

You're a rose that grows from the concrete, unique, out there, and vibrate. You have what I was looking for and I can't deny it.

I'll love you for ever and for always.
No matter where we go in life, you'll always be in that one special place.

**I know it may not be great but did the best i can first poem i wrote i just hope it was good so just let me know. Thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    You have captured a wonderful place in the heart. It brings one pleasure just from the reading of it. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I see this alot in your poems:
    Soft sweet whispers you tell me in my ear. While kissing my head and holding me close and near.

    i would rarher have done this:
    Soft sweet whispers you tell me in my ear,
    While kissing my head
    and holding me close and near.

    just a thought though

  • 17 years ago

    by marree

    I really liked it well done=]

  • 17 years ago

    by TeenXLoveXTragedy

    This is a really good poem..theres a lot of feeling in it, good job, keep it up