If i..

by gabrielle.Xx   Aug 8, 2006


If i lay here alone and day dream
will you come lay by my side
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if i stand here with my lips parted and eyes closed
will you come and kiss my lips
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if i sit here and imagine me and you together
will you read my mind and be mine
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if i hold out my hand out in the air
will you walk by and fill the gaps bewteen my fingers with yours?
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if i gather up enough confidence to tell you how i feel
will you tell me you love me the same way i love you..?

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Sweet. thankz for the commentz

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem was very heartfelt and touching and does speak of the many questions people want to ask the ones they have feelings for. Lovely poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aww very sweet and touching. Nicely written.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ryko

    I thought this poem was very heart felt. I expected more of a metaphorical twist at the end but I liked the honesty in it, is it about a real person? I can tell you definitly were expressing your true feelings its very good!

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