Comments : If i..

  • 17 years ago

    by Ryko

    I thought this poem was very heart felt. I expected more of a metaphorical twist at the end but I liked the honesty in it, is it about a real person? I can tell you definitly were expressing your true feelings its very good!

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aww very sweet and touching. Nicely written.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem was very heartfelt and touching and does speak of the many questions people want to ask the ones they have feelings for. Lovely poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Sweet. thankz for the commentz