When Smiles Collide

by Twisted Heart   Aug 9, 2006


Two whispered souls
From across the room
Who have thoughts
of despair and gloom.

But for just a moment
They're lost in time
And spirits lift
When smiles collide.

Suddenly, they feel
that all's not lost
Kindred souls together
A simple gesture's brought.

A gentle lift of sunshine
upon lips that cannot hide
The act of human kindness
When smiles collide.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Not your best, I think it needs somthing else, though I cannot say exactly what. It seems too...cheesy? No, I don't know. Forced, maybe.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #1:

    This was so good...so much feeling. I very much love your work. So much talent in every piece! Great job and if you keep writing I gaurantee I'll keep reading :)!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Beautiful. Simple, and yet so sweet. Well done. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully penned! I love the way this is worded, awesome title as well though you can't take credit for that...lol.
    Love ya~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    THank you for writing a poem from my title, it was magnificent in every way, it is always great too see people write something from a title that I just could not do, so cheers to you, it was quite a treat. Timothy r

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