X-You and Me-X

by χ-я.ι.α-χ   Aug 10, 2006


My mind and soul is full of passion
Yours is cold and full of distress.

My heart is an open door with but one key in your possession.
Yours is a locked dungeon whose key has been swallowed by a mystical dragon.

My life is full of excitement and warmth.
Yours is like winter with a burst of chill.

My face, full of smiles and cheer.
Yours, white as snow with but a tear to spare.

My love is pure and full of meaning
Yours is damaged and in need of my loving, tender care..let me in..let me help you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Goood poem... keep it ^

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Ooh, I loved this one! It was awesome.. I loved the descriptions, metaphors, and emotions you used. They were very powerful and the effect was great!

    My like is full of excitement and warmth.
    ^ I think you meant "Life"

    Wonderful job, loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Misz Luving You

    Lovely, great poem keep up the good work.

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