Gate

by Aline   Aug 10, 2006


I linger on the fortress’ stairs
And tremble from what I couldn’t dare
With no wind descending from the tower
Blowing the dust into my hair

Silence was a moment to share
With the lonesome pictures and a broken chair
Silence touched the forsaken walls
And the mysteries hidden within the air

For the gate is soon shown for what I care
And to what hides inside must be fair
I open the gate to see my father
A scene so hard for an angel to bear.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah.. so deap and so sad, but such a great job. Nice work. Keep it up. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by x little miss depressed x

    Its very well rhimed and very well written but i think it is a bi hard to follow for dumb blones like me :P well done keep up the goosd work i will give it a 4 !!

  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    Deep.... very deep.... check out those funky charaxters though. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This is an awesome poem, 5/5 you deserve no less. I loved the rhyming it flowed very smoothly great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by skye

    Hey just wirting back , umm i cant get over he was my first love and i know i wont not get over we been together since we were 5 yrs old yea we were child sweethearts so i wont get over but great poem and i am sorry about ur fathers death
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    Sarah

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