Stars upon the sky

Nicely done, keep it up

I really like this.. keep it up

Yeah i'm new you know i would just write things down so i decided to write some poems! So thanks i'm working on it trying to make it have a little more flow! Well thanks again so much!

Thanks for the advice on my poem i tried to fix it and i ended up changing the whole thing but i just wanted to tell i like your poems there are really good! :)

I have not recall reading where poems have to rhyme.Never mind that,I like this poem, do you mind if I have a copy