Wow this was a good poem. you might wanna break it down into stanzas but other than that it was exellent. it flowed well and rhymed very good.

Oh a very talented poem, so deep and sad.
you have done a great job here, I really enjoyed reading it.
keep it up/5/5

OMG that was really deep.

But this f u c k ing list
Can go on and on
And you'll only miss me
When I'm gone

these lines really stood out to me.
It was a great poem. Flowed like silk and loved the format.
5/5

Wow, This was really good. Very strong ending aswel. I loved how your lines were so short, gave it so much more depth to it. There's nothing that I'd change, it was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Sad man... i feel the pain and lost in this poem... great job, keep writing!

~angel~

Wow the ending was sooooooo powerful. The flow was brilliant I don't think there is any way of improving it! Well done! Also if you ever need to talk or anything just msg me because we all have to stcik together k!
Keep writing don't let that talent go to waste!
xxx

Awww, wow! that was brilliant! the flow worked really well, the descriptions were beautiful yet sad, the emotion was loud and clear.. wow, i loved this! your wording was excellent and i loved how the words seemed to trickle down the page.. wonderful job! 5/5

Wow, really enjoyed this poem, i can really relate.

well done, keep up the good work 5/5

Awhhh. That's sad. I loved reading it though. My favorite lines would have to be.
"I'll miss the kisses
I'll miss the fights
I'll miss your touch
And the sleepless nights
I'll miss the pills
I'll miss your eyes
I'll miss the knife
And the butterflies
But this f u c k ing list
Can go on and on
And you'll only miss me
When I'm gone"

Loved them it was so emotiona. I give it a five. Keep up the great work Hun.

This is really depressing but really really good!! i love it!!

Rena.

Wo i just got out of a long term relationship and thats exactly how i feel!!! awsum!!!

Pretty good job. The flow was nice. Your rhymes and vocab was a bit basic.

OMG this is EXCELLENT!!! i love everythin about it! you worded it exactly right and i can relate to it. i love the way you ended it.... but you'll only miss me when i'm gone...so true fREAKIN AMAZING!! love reading your poems! keep em coming!
-hayley

I LOVE this poem.. its amazing. and i can relate to it... very well written...keep it up! 5/5

Good one

Woowww! Aww this poem was so sad, yet so very very beautiful! I LOVED it! You had a great flow throughout your poem, and the ending was done very well. Nice imagery as well. I especially liked the lines:

"Crushed me down
Down below
So far down
You'll never know
And all these tears
I always cry
Keep on running
They'll never dry"

The S h i t. =P

5/5

--Angie xoxo

I thought it was worth the 5/5. The end was pretty damn powerful n I like the poem all together. Great Job

Wow this is so deep
im left witout words

Great poem.

Wow you are such a powerful writer, I loved the emotions you put into this and how short the sentences where. It really kept me hooked on the poem. I have loved reading your poems and is one of my favorites :) 5/5 Take care