Just A Dream

by twisted reality   Aug 12, 2006


He's all I've been waiting for,
All I've wanted to adore.
It's those blue eyes so deep,
That keep me entranced as I sleep.

The trusting smile you bear,
After everything you've despaired,
Gives me hope beyond belief of yours,
And makes me want to end these wars.

Alas, I know we will not come to be,
As I have recently come to see,
Because there really is no you.
You came from out of the blue.

You're nothing but a good dream,
Nothing like I have ever seen.
I'll see your smile beam,
Only in a distant dream.

**Shorter than a lot of my other poems, I know, but it was sort of random and I just started to write and it flowed from my pen to the paper. I really would like to know what you guys think =) **

xoxo
sammy cakes

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  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Once again i already dsid this poem 4 u a long time ago

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Very well written and beautifully penned I love it yeah this is shorter but really great I love how you used words and rhyme it great job

    XD
    Geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This part i loved
    "I'll see your smile beam,
    Only in a distant dream."

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. I love this poem. I can somewhat relate to it. Except the guy from my dreams is real, just not mine anymore. But I loved this poem. You did such a great job on this! Keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Very Good 5/5