Comments : Pearl (acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww, wow, that was beautiful! the flow was good and the descriptions and imagery were amazing.. the only think i would recommend would be to add a description of what an acrostic is at the bottom.. nice job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Ooh, woweee! This was amazing, Noni. I loved your vocab in this one! You're really good at writing nature poems, I hope you know that. This was great. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wow. That was just beautiful. Every line had such perfect stunning imagery and vocab.
    Excellent job
    10/10

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah, excellent job. You did a perfect job of using vocab and i could see exactly what you were writing about. Great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Perhaps my mind is so simple to not feel what you are feeling in this poem. 4.5
    I don't seem to enjoy the short poems as much as the lengthy ones...

  • 16 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Wow.....i love acrostic poems....amazing....bravo..a 5/5 =D