I really liked it so powerful

Wow, it's great. Alice and Wonderland, one of my personal favourites. But it will be so much better when they make the new one feat. marilyn manson, no? anyway, good poem and I am going to stop my ramblings right,,,,now. kbye.

Wow this is deep. So much symbolism. Great job. 5/5
-Kakashi

Dear Mr. Gary,

I would like to confer the title of Sir to you for teaching me a lesson thru this gr8 poem of yours. Its so visual... So real...