Blazing {Pleiades}

by Natalie   Aug 14, 2006


Blazing [Pleiades]

Beautiful touching words,
Beating throughout time,
Brightening light below,
Breaking through hearts,
Blazing love into veins,
Bursting with happiness,
Beginning a new today.

August 14th 2006
Copyright (c) Natalie.

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Pleiades: Only one word is allowed in the title, followed
by a seven-line stanza. The first word in every line must
begin with the same letter as the word in the title.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hmmm.
    not quite as goodim sorry to say.
    4/5
    it didnt impress me as much.
    The meaning was missing
    and your descriptiveness had disappeared.

    It was still good but not 5/5 good

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I lik this one it makes me really happy...a 5/5 for me..

  • 17 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey natalie, wonderful poem!, you have done a really great job on this one. it really makes me think of love and how strong it is!
    wonderful poem!
    love mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    Good job again! It's hard to have every line starting with the same letter but you did it great and even had it flowing nicely.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh. It's better then mine. And I agree Hun. They are really hard to write. Mine took me nearly one hour to get it perfect. Great job, I loved it. :]]]]]]]]]

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