Comments : Shards of Imminent Loss

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This is really great. glad to see you posting again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, I'm speechless Holly!

    Hands cut
    on fallen tears
    while rummaging through the chaos
    ^^^ Wow, love the wording here!

    Conquering
    the darkness
    while lighting the space in between
    ^^^ That third line really seals the deal, excellent!

    Stealing
    the fragments
    of the person I used to be
    ^^^ Just wow!

    Amazing piece of poetry here, Holly!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    This is a fantastic poem, i look up to your poetry. bye.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was an okay piece, I think. What most intrigued me was the structure, very unique, and rather nice. The words themselves were quite good too, yet for some reason, I wasn't particularly impressed with it, I wish I could tell you why, but I don't know the answer, sorry.

    Brad